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Date: 2009-08-27 09:24 pm (UTC)
MY GOODNESS.

Okay, so you have lots of comments already and I don't feel like I have anything useful to add, but compliments are always good, right? So I just wanted to let you know that THIS HAS JUST BECOME MY FAVORITE ONE-SHOT ON THE INTERNET. You have pulled off every single character brilliantly, from both fandoms, and somehow made it all seem plausible. I could see this happening, I could see every one of the jokes and motions and lines happening, and how did you keep so many people in character?! I LOVE IT. THE ENTIRE FIC.

Nice writing, even. A great blend of Gus being mildly annoyed yet adoring, just how I expect--nothing betrays the way he behaves in the show, nothing too mushy and certainly nothing out-of-character. Very smooth, feels natural, great rhythm, just amazing dialogue...guh, I know it sounds like I'm brown-nosing but I sincerely think this is perfect. So, yeah, thanks for sharing!!
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