There was just so much of this fic that worked, where would one begin to explain it. I've read a few good UB fics, less good D/B fics, but this is up there with a few great ones I've read. It's even better because this is your first UB fic and it just blends together in such a way that you can see it happening. They would have a break down of the friendship if she left, especially if she left because of another woman and he didn't realise that.

I had so many favourite parts I can't name them all, but they were great and they added to the believability of the stroy you told.

You are a great desginer! You found the perfect material, matched it with the correct thread and created a masterpiece that would rivial those of Gods :) Thank you.